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LOVE IT :D

You sir, are one awesome individual.

Amazing as usual, i don't really have much else to say. Top quality beat Nate.

Not too bad, at least you have some structure.
I like the synth introduced at around 0:24, it's really quite nice.
The arpeggio melody is something to be proud of, i like it :)

Apart from that, I was disappointed that the song ended! FINISH IT
Keep going, you'll go far with the right ambition and attitude!

3/5
7/10

Since i haven't heard the original song that this is a remake of, I'm judging this based on how it sounds as a separate song.

The transition from the vocal reverb and stutter to the massive bass sound is just too jumpy, just too sudden. The bass can't just lead the song on it's own, you need some other instruments to back it up.

It's also too repetitive, and when i listened to it for an extended period of time, i got sick of the bass if i'm honest. Make it interesting and different, make the audience engage into the song more.

You really need to work on this song if it is to be successful, as i can't really see much to like.
Except the drums, they're awesome. Keep them as they are, you could make them stronger if you wanted.

Please take my advise kindly, i don't want to sound like an Internet troll.

2.5/5
6/10

EmptyCell responds:

Yeah, how you said... My first survive is repetitive, and I wanted to do something like that... I'm that type, when I hear a mass of sound, I can't hear a song, I hear 'Mess'. So, I still train that instinct (or how said that...). You're right, but I'm still... Rookie, maybe I'll do something much later.

The gamey style lead is awesome! Please continue with the song, add some more complex melodies and drum patterns, this song has a lot of potential...

Good job overall man!

4/5
8/10

Some points about the start:
1) Loving the intro
2) Nice decrescendo
3) I agree with the guy before me, add a sub to this song and you're all set!

Great techniques for the production and structure of the song though, i can give you some major credit for that!

4/5
8/10

Ghosts4Hire responds:

I got the levels under control and I agree with both comments about the sub bass and am fixing that right now as I type this. Hopefully the finished version will be posted tonight.

Drum N Bass is usually a faster tempo than this, and I don't really think the drums are suited to the style you were going for. Apart from the small things, i like the song. It has a nice beat to it, i can nod my head in appreciation. Maybe you were going for dubstep, it's the closest genre to the song you made ( I think ).

4/5
8/10

I love the sounds you used! this is a really nice piece you cooked up, good job :)

4/5
8/10

Ediblefungus responds:

Thanks for the good review!

I don't see why this is rated down so much, the loop does what it says on the tin.
You created a great spooky and sinister feel.

8/10
4/5

Lich responds:

Thanks for the review :)
I just ignore the scores to be honest, it's easier that way.

Well,

The synth at the start is so awful, it really puts me off! the rest of the song is okay, but it's just that synth! i hope you get some better reviews.....

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